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The Little Shroud – 04

The Little Shroud – 04

by Gina Biggs on May 2, 2012 at 12:01 am
Posted In: The Little Shroud
└ Tags: child, fairy tale, fairytale, ghost, mother, son, stove

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  1. Rebochan
    Rebochan
    May 2, 2012 at 12:02 am | # | Reply

    Oh, I’m not going to need that heart you just ripped out anymore…it’s okay…

    • DiDi
      DiDi
      May 2, 2012 at 12:30 am | # | Reply

      This is probably one of the only things about this strip that will make me laugh…

  2. Jes
    Jes
    May 2, 2012 at 12:11 am | # | Reply

    That last pannel…so sad. :(

  3. Dani
    Dani
    May 2, 2012 at 1:05 am | # | Reply

    Maybe I’m a horrible person, but the last panel made me laugh. I guess it’s because I’m volunteer in the nursery at my church, but it’s so typical– he’s just fine until the moment he sees his mom, then it’s tears and wailing.

    • N
      N
      May 2, 2012 at 2:18 am | # | Reply

      Actually, it made me laugh too. He’s suddenly there, seemingly clueless as to his fate, and bursts out crying like any other child would do. It’s cute, and knowing how kids are, it is chuckle-worthy – in an endearing sort of way.

      • Shnon
        Shnon
        May 3, 2012 at 12:41 pm | # | Reply

        You know, this made me well up more than this actual comic page. Just the thought of this little child not understanding whats different and acting so typical, and thinking of how it must tear apart his mother… I… gah… so much tearyness…

  4. Gina
    Gina
    May 2, 2012 at 1:27 am | # | Reply

    I feel just as if it were my own. I don’t want to continue reading this one, but I know I will!

    • 13thprotector
      13thprotector
      May 3, 2012 at 11:02 am | # | Reply

      Oi yo, stay strong!

  5. Erin
    Erin
    May 2, 2012 at 7:56 am | # | Reply

    The last two panels are cute, it is how a normal child would react. That said this is really difficult for me to read. My five year old little brother passed away ten years ago and the kind of pain my mother went through is indescribable. I don’t think there is any pain worse than losing a child.

  6. Valerie
    Valerie
    May 2, 2012 at 10:52 am | # | Reply

    This almost brought me to tears. I can’t imagine losing my own daughter and I don’t know about reading this one comic anymore until the next one.. But I probably will still read it..

  7. Glowworm
    Glowworm
    May 2, 2012 at 11:13 am | # | Reply

    This is really making me teary. It’s wonderful how emotional it is without a single word needed to tell the story.

  8. Nanenna
    Nanenna
    May 2, 2012 at 12:19 pm | # | Reply

    I was about to cry… and then I read the comments.

  9. moonlantern
    moonlantern
    May 2, 2012 at 2:38 pm | # | Reply

    So here I was, music on shuffle, checking comics. And just as I got here Heaven’s Not Enough came on. ;.-.;

  10. jaasak
    jaasak
    May 2, 2012 at 8:51 pm | # | Reply

    I look at this and frankly I am on the verge of tears, (men do cry, you know). My wife lost her oldest child at that age and if she read this, believe me she’d break down; it may’ve been 41 years but parents never forget: no parent should ever, ever outlive their child! I can’t possibly imagine losing a child…the heartbreak this mom feels I, too, feel. How can any of you laugh at this?? Sheesh!!!

    • RandomPerson
      RandomPerson
      May 3, 2012 at 8:43 am | # | Reply

      The people who say they had a laugh explained that. They also said they were not laughing at the death of the child, just the behavior of the ghost child saying it was so much like a normal kid’s reaction. Reading others comments fully might just help you a bit in understanding another person’s reasons.

      That said I also understand where you could feel offended by that, yet even so I urge you take a bit more time before jumping to conclusions.

      • jaasak
        jaasak
        May 7, 2012 at 3:43 am | # | Reply

        Dear Ran;
        It ain’t that I don’t see the reason for the laughter: yes, our other boys did that sorta thing so the reaction is understandable. But as 13th protector said, my wife never got to hold her son. This is just so sad and lamentable. Very good story and well placed so please don’t think I’m being a pisser over this, just that it touches a painful spot in our family, is all.

  11. TanakaHinote
    TanakaHinote
    May 2, 2012 at 9:55 pm | # | Reply

    Oh man I cried after seeing this page :(

  12. Sierra
    Sierra
    May 2, 2012 at 11:50 pm | # | Reply

    Just gutted! :(

  13. 13thprotector
    13thprotector
    May 3, 2012 at 11:04 am | # | Reply

    The ghost seems different from my imagined, but it is all from your imagination so I won’t complain.

    And, please don’t start crying too, I got a friend who just started bawling when she saw this, she lost a child too, never even got to see it before it passed. :(

  14. hut
    hut
    May 3, 2012 at 8:02 pm | # | Reply

    children have mirror reflexes. They see us get upset, they get upset. Poor things…both of them.

  15. SotiCoto
    SotiCoto
    February 11, 2013 at 8:40 am | # | Reply

    See… I see this as an opportunity for closure…

    Apparently she doesn’t. She sees this as an opportunity to QQ moar and make sure her dead kid knows just how messed up she is. GG, silly woman. ¬_¬

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↓ Transcript
Panel 1: Mother is dressed in black and crying.
Panel 2: Mother is alone in her bed, crying.
Panel 3: There is a light outside of her room.
Panel 4: Mother is alarmed, tears running down her cheeks.
Panel 5: A ghost that looks like her son is sitting by the stove.
Panel 6: Ghost sees his mother.
Panel 7: The son cries out and the mother cries.

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